My personal favorite and also one of the best made panels I’ve ever created. It’s probably not very funny, since my initial test marketing revealed about 90% of folks know neither what a midden is nor are familiar with the original turn of phrase, which as several of my classic started out as a mondegreen than morphs into the usual malapropism. Typically a more colloquial version is heard/pronounced as "middlin'" which eases the grammatical sleight of hand (or mouth in this instance) that is being spoofed, but regardless it’s perfectly done.
The drawing itself is an ideal composition, with exemplary linework, the palette too. Every element is no more, no less of what is needs to be. There’s just enough cutting in of cast-shadow shapes for contrasting value (example: the slightly darker inside of the tails, and on the tree trunk), and not too much airbrush gradations to add a hint of volume (see the footpads) so the overall aesthetic isn’t too “Photoshoppy.” It also helps that the colors are not high chroma, so not very vibrant, almost pastellish (just a dozen colors: three shades of brown, three greens, a blue, pink, yellow and gray + b&w). The only texture is a lot of stippling, a touch of spot-blacks using gestural stickwork on the drunken forest. *Technically those three back spruce, the same ubiquitous species that comprises much of the boreal forest and is also supposed to be what the squirrel on the right is leaning against, since those are the trees which typically have a midden – but hey, there are also talking rodents, so…?
Speaking of speaking the speech bubbles are positioned just so: the first one balanced in the upper right corner of sky and set a tad bit higher than the second, which overlaps the tree and thus overall reading left-to-right/top-to-bottom it leads the eye down the vertical pointer of the trunk to the midden itself, the darkest area w/highest contrast. The lettering is simple, legible, balanced and occupying a perfect amount of real estate within the bubbles leaving plenty of breathing room around the letters, words and unit of dialog. So this relatively simple panel is a perfect example of sequentially processing the parts, both text + image, and arriving at the idea.
And that completes our over-assessment of the cartoon in question for this episode of flogging a dead horse, aka "pole-vaulting over a moose turd."








































